[quote=“Shadow”]Definitely better on the rhyming front, though I think the overall literary quality is not up to Yates.
Perhaps you should get a job as a Rapper and leave the poetry to him. Have a gander (no pun intended) at these lines by the great man:
Was it for this the wild geese [COLOR=“DarkRed”]spread
The grey wing upon every [COLOR=“DarkOrchid”]tide;
For this that all that blood was [COLOR=“DarkRed”]shed,
For this Edward Fitzgerald [COLOR=“DarkOrchid”]died,[/quote]
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Good documentary on Channel 4 now, called benefit busters…Shows how they train the long term unemployed and single mothers and get them back to work, they could learn a few lessons over here from them…
They could do one on recently graduated students with side enterprises too who draw the dole so that they can sit on their holes for most of the day… I could be brought on board as a casting director…